Saturday, October 6, 2007

Furnished And Burnished Comments

Rating: 5.0

My feet beat a rhythm across the Shopping Arcade floors,
and in through the swinging doors.
Up speeding lifts, to counters packed with attractive goods
and gifts.
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Ernestine Northover
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Andrew Blakemore 16 April 2008

I'm sure that you don't need all that make-up and are as pretty as a picture without it. Loved this poem, a great insight to the female world. Andrew x

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Duncan Wyllie 10 October 2007

Tis the rythmn of the super-store, that taxes pockets even more, but if you'll settle for a treat, then read this poem of the street... Great fun here Ernestine..thankyou for sharing it Love duncan X

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Alison Cassidy 06 October 2007

This one reads beautifully out loud Ernestine - you really HEAR the clever rhymes within rhymes that are the hallmark of this(tongue in cheek?) account of glamour and feel good consumption. The tap tap of your feet is captured by the tap tap of the rhythms you have used so effectively. Great poem. love, Allie xxxx

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Meggie Gultiano 06 October 2007

Wish i was with you, too..Great Ern! i love this..so so enjoyable to read! thanks.. hugs, Meggie

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Bonnie Harding 06 October 2007

Hey Ernestine, nice little shopping spree....and hope you had a nice visit!

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Scarlett Treat 06 October 2007

The only thing left out of this charming shopping trip....was lunch with a pal! So.. let's do lunch soon, O. K.? Loved this little ditty....

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