Furious Nature Comments

Run, run came voice from distance Could not find out where form as instance? May be I was in deep and fast asleep

Heard heavy foot steps running down Sensed as if I was loosing crown Something wrong with no reply received

thought of jumping from the top floor Did not care to see back and close the door Wife was already down but came with big cry

May be I was in deep and fast asleep Heard simple a sound of cloak and beep..........10

Sky was lit with red sun shine Heavy wind blew with rhythm fine...........10

Heard heavy foot steps running down Sensed as if I was loosing crown.....10

Run, run came voice from distance Could not find out where form as instance? ........10 very good poem

Rightly pictured the scene. Well done.

Heard heavy foot steps running down Sensed as if I was loosing crown...........10

Heard heavy foot steps running down Sensed as if I was loosing crown Something wrong with no reply received.....10

a fine literary piece/text!

Sky was lit with red sun shine Heavy wind blew with rhythm fine No time to witness the fury of nature....10

Shouted in sleep as mighty king Who is pulling me to get in the ring? ....10

Bed simply shook with full swing As if it got speed and sudden wing......10

Bed simply shook with full swing As if it got speed and sudden wing...very good...10

May be I was in deep and fast asleep Heard simple a sound of cloak and beep.....10

Sky was lit with red sun shine Heavy wind blew with rhythm fine.....10

Can’t say she is so ugly Intelligent but look so homely Black sports on the rough face For her, there was no one in the race....10

a nice theme! ! ! a good description! ! ! nature is deeper than any thing! ! ! it hides mysterious matters... you are well describing the phenomana of nature well done! ! !

Bed simply shook with full swing As if it got speed and sudden wing Shouted in sleep as mighty king Who is pulling me to get in the ring.....10