Funny Wear, Steel Soldiers Comments

i do enjoy reading the poem i am going to use it for my poem project

Beautiful......... I pray that your okay.

nice poem and this poem shows your love for poetry and we appreciate your effort. Thank you. Keep it up

Within a complex war environment, and being far from a beloved one, must be so complicated and sad. You have managed to create a lovely thread in which you expressed your feelings and above all your hopeful spirit towards living your story of magic... or magical story. Wishing you a long, happy life!

very wonderful poem, i enjoy reading it, thanks 4 sharing

Molay, the heart and soul of you comes through this piece of writing. Whatever it lacks in the area of poetic sophistication is in largest part made up for by your spiritual good health, sincerity and humor. It would be a shame if you did not continue to write.

A great piece of that you have wrote, I have enjoyed it, thank you for inviting me.

The warm feelings of being with your love in imagination with the cold war around you. Very nice contrast. Excellent poem. I like it very much

Its excellent poem I would go over it again check it for mistakes.

I do not know what it is to live through war, I've been only a spectator from afar. I would imagine it is lonely and the fear would get to me certainly. I know that the thought of the one I desire and love would comfort me as well. This is a very good poem. Great expression. I think your broken english coming through adds an ingredient that is only you. Keep writing. A+

A great flowing poem. Like it.

What a beautiful and lovely poem. Very sweet. :) It's fantastic.

:) I like this one you wrote. Thanks for it.

AWWWZ what a magnificant poem :) absolutely adorable ;) ~Bella

Great Poem! Thanks a lot for inviting me to read ^^.

Much better English. A lot easier to understand. Keep it up!

Great emotional content. Love is such a sweet thing to write about and you said it so well.

lots of emotion in this work. keep writing, ric

It 's a good poem......and you're on the metamorphosis......and I like this one...top marks! ! ! ! ! !

Great poem. And your English is much better in this one and flows much better. Great work, keep improving. :)