Saturday, April 19, 2014

.........Funny Song......... Comments

Rating: 5.0

If you meet me.
You won't love dear,
I have a stick,
which may arise fear.
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Neela Nath Das
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Captain Herbert Poetry 27 April 2014

Very inspiring and interesting to read

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Tanya Gupta 24 April 2014

hah..hah..hah.. what a lovely write, enjoyed a lot. please come and read my poems and gve me your veiws

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Sekharan Pookkat 23 April 2014

Your body may be old but your thoughts are young and inspiring

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Neela Nath Das 21 April 2014

Thomas, thanks for picking up the humor of this write!

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Neela Nath Das 19 April 2014

Ha ha F.B.Thanks for your advice! Amazing prompt poem from a promising poet's pen.

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Chuy Amante 19 April 2014

You are a silly young nature watcher Drive to the bar, get a man and be a debaucher! Make that tired blood turn into brandy, might buy you 20 yrs, could be real handy!

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