Saturday, November 17, 2018

Funny Side Of Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

I knew a fish who lived in a jar
To meet his friend who lived very far
At once she jumped out of the jar
Since there was no water, it was bizarre
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M. Asim Nehal
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Omyul Utug 17 November 2018

Never try to come out of your skin. Strong message. Great poem with a touch of fun.

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Mihaela Pirjol 17 November 2018

This poem has the characteristic of a limerick; but, it is even better! I love the rhymes of each line! And even more...the moral of it...the scar, is a proof she has lived and felt life...

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Pallab Chaudhury 17 November 2018

Additionally, it got a scar.... Very funny. Thank you for sharing with us. PC

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