Can't help but feel sick to my stomach every time
I hear you say those words.
I know it shouldn't hurt but it does.
We know so little but we still know so much.
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I have read several of your poems and I like what you say, and your directness, you get over how you feel with passion and show the unjustness that can be felt within a relationship when either party takes advantage of the other.
I love this insighful write full of suprising thoughts of skipping a chapter but look at what we would miss! Original and superb write!
wow, beautiful! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! you have said the truth. by skipping one page of our life we skip the happiness and all those corrections that we get from mistakes which help in our character building. SERIOUSLY! its awsoume.
The soul of this work mostly perish the weary life. While the feelings are said truly. Nice one!
Poetry from the heart is always the toughest to write and put out there. A good write, thank you for sharing.
Beautifully put forth Kelsea. Each moment in a relationship is a step that cannot be hopped. Each micro step would ultimately form the macro picture...like joining the dots. Imperative (like you say) , that slow & steady would yield better long term dividends. A beautiful write from a pure heart. Loved reading it. Thanks
A wonderful poetry.... Keep it up... You may like to read my poem In the mid of the night depression you are killing me too... Naila