Monday, September 2, 2013

Funny Little Sayings Comments

Rating: 3.8

Can't help but feel sick to my stomach every time
I hear you say those words.
I know it shouldn't hurt but it does.
We know so little but we still know so much.
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Kelsea Osterman
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Naila Rais 13 May 2018

A wonderful poetry.... Keep it up... You may like to read my poem In the mid of the night depression you are killing me too... Naila

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Damian Cranney 04 September 2013

I have read several of your poems and I like what you say, and your directness, you get over how you feel with passion and show the unjustness that can be felt within a relationship when either party takes advantage of the other.

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Hazel Durham 02 September 2013

I love this insighful write full of suprising thoughts of skipping a chapter but look at what we would miss! Original and superb write!

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Free Bird 02 September 2013

wow, beautiful! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! you have said the truth. by skipping one page of our life we skip the happiness and all those corrections that we get from mistakes which help in our character building. SERIOUSLY! its awsoume.

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 02 September 2013

The soul of this work mostly perish the weary life. While the feelings are said truly. Nice one!

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Tim Vallie 02 September 2013

Poetry from the heart is always the toughest to write and put out there. A good write, thank you for sharing.

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Deepak Sawhney 02 September 2013

Beautifully put forth Kelsea. Each moment in a relationship is a step that cannot be hopped. Each micro step would ultimately form the macro picture...like joining the dots. Imperative (like you say) , that slow & steady would yield better long term dividends. A beautiful write from a pure heart. Loved reading it. Thanks

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