It is funny, isn't it,
how fast one can go
from joy to sorrow
down life's twisty road.
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So, he called you a liar, he says it's true, no matter what you say or what you do. 'Tis soul-killing to suffer so, to be thought as less than the truth you know... Well, time goes on and another day comes; feel here words are like bees of honey....I wish to have a fun... sweets are love
It's great poem, it's so easy to smile and after while feel soroow and then turn to smile again and how much we need some touches and some lies sometimes too to feel the way we do, I really enjoyed your poem, great write Best wishes Anna
It must be awful to tell the truth, and be called a liar! ! (Even worse than lying, and people believing you.) I don't know the person who is the subject of this fine dedication/tribute...but I do know that it's Esther's truth... Fine work :) Jack.
Esther, this is a very touching poem. Your warmth and compassion carry the sad truth you share. 'To be thought as less than the truth you know' is a fine expression of an awful reality and yet you have managed to keep the sun of optimism shining at the end. A beautiful tribute, Esther. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Uplifting and inspirational - your strong poetic voice rings out of this one Esther. Justine :)
Somehow sad, but also sweet and inspirational. This is looks pretty close to final form with good rhymes and a great message. -chuck
And Little Spirit is most fortunate to have a friend like Essemee, from whom to draw her strength as well. Lucky lady! Scarlett
Hey, great write Esther. Sock it to them Gal. One must never give in, ride above the trauma. Love Ernestine XXX
Awesome poem, Esther! A wonderfully empathetic write... warm hearted and an inspiring message to end with! Well done! ! Brian
The feelings expressed here are so geniune, so heartfelt, and so wise. Wonderful poem, Esther. The sun is shining on your gift already. Love, sandra
YES! YES! YES! If there were ever words that could open darkened doors then these could well be among them, Awesome work of lifting brilliance Love duncan X
So often true; but with a sense of hope nonetheless.