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Loved the metaphor used here. Poetic language of the poem, so well blended. Well done! ; D

Poetry of intense sore and sour…rich metaphor… with passionate yearning… ‘for carry me angel, fly with me, /away to infinity, ’…’ uncharted horizons’…with ‘melt with me, ’… Deep desire to be in unique oneness with ungetable [may be] or freely getable…here poetic vacillation as finality culminated in non-existence [final exit] where in a purest state wants to be in ‘destroy the devil in me, ‘….thanks for sharing… Ms. Nivedita UK