Thursday, August 23, 2012

Funeral Of Dreams Comments

Rating: 5.0

The Champak odours fall
Bird of paradise sings melody tune;
Clouds form a Nacreous;
Sunset and Sunrise!
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Deep Mukherjee
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Ebi Robert 11 December 2013

sweet song to the hears....thanks

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Shahzia Batool 10 November 2012

I like your word choice and in the line-arrangement you know where to mark the cut...good work Deep...

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Aung Si 09 October 2012

Good job! Bird of paradise sings melody tune; Stuck in the sick grip of serpent I love these verses.

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