Funeral Of A Soul Comments

Wow Blaine! ! I got dragged into reading your poem when I looked at the title.. The usual concept of souls' being immortal is something we all hear so I first applaud you to break from that. Poetic imagination is all about breaking away from the usual thinking... Now getting back to the poem your idea of setting this up on a rainy evening is perfect. People gathering and personifying the soul as a female is also apt.. Then you bring the speaker in and and he/she talks about his/her feelings.. I decided to read your poem first today, and I really don't regret it mate! A perfect one, for me :) Thanks for sharing...