Friday, August 12, 2005

Funeral Flowers Comments

Rating: 4.5

Cresting flowers are plumed as waves.
Lives, our lives are smashed ashore.
Slips rip tide, waves pour pounded mortal roar.
The single life now drowns.
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Glenn Bagshaw
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Korobi Kotha 24 January 2016

Absolutely beautiful

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Matthew Pearson 12 August 2005

This is alliteration heaven, Glenn. I thought this was a very competent piece.The use of language is very well measured.

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