Funeral End For My Friend Comments

A heartfelt poem, Howard. I enjoyed reading your words. Read my 'When You Think of Me' poem. It's about dealing with death. You might appreciate its content. Best wishes to you.

A wonderful tribute to your mother. I’m sure I didn’t read it wrong, the last comment said him. Adeline

may his soul rest in peace............beautiful peice

We never really lose a loved one in death.....for we do have the memory. Please read 'Is Not...Perception....Reality.'

Howard...I'm so sorry that I missed this sad time in your life. Losing a parent isn't an easy thing to deal with. You've created a lovely tribute to her in your poem...I think that she would be pleased. My thoughts are with you. Hugs, Dee

a beautiful poem deep i like it, keep it up.

I feel that you are not truly tapping into your elements. It seems too much emphasis was placed on rhyming and not enough on the raw moments that split ourselves from human to poet. Not that i'm saying humans aren't poets or vice versa just that there is a balance lost between verbal intimacies and existing. By the way i'm the worste speller known to be a poet so excuse any errors. Also, your title is misleading in a sense...but then again, in the rarity of a moment, it is a poets job to reach his highest or lowest peaks, and in doing so he reaches those along the same peaks. I may not just be on your peak. Your a writer, i appriciate you, keep it up because it is the balance of a lost mans soul-in my opinion. Thanks for allowing me to put my input. Hollie

Wow it's wonderful I love it.

Your deep feelings appear for sumone u like truely! gud write

Wow I like it. Its really good n sad...

A beautiful tribute to someon you love (not loved) because this kind of love is never buried.... Yuri*

im sorry for your loss its just a sad day for you and the VT college thanks for letting me read it

Sorry for ur loss....love the poem

Sorry to read of your loss. Sorrow comes through strongly. F

wow, i really like this. its deep. sorry 4 ur loss. thanx 4 askin me 2 read ur poems. theyre awesom

this is beautiful..I'm sorry for your loss...it's never easy, and if I'm being honest, it never really gets any easier...hugs. Always, Amberlee

Sweet, lovely, but, most of all...poignant. To really touch a reader's heart, you must be a special writer! You are....indeed!

a very touching piece..You are holding your emotions here..it is better to let it out..A wonderful piece! and greatly penned..Thanks for sharing my friend. Love, Meggie

Yes, it`s a great poem! :) i rate it a 10

WOW! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! That was great. idk wat else 2 say, that was amazing. i give it a 100% an im addin it 2 my fav poems.