Wednesday, August 8, 2018

Funeral Comments

Rating: 5.0

"Shut up, Be silent, "
Amazed to feel
the stuffing up of my mouth
with earth,
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Bisy Untan
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Dr Dillip K Swain 08 August 2018

I laid down motionless/The noise of shoveling filled my ear....pulsating poetic expression! A thought provoking poem! (10)

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Bisy Untan 09 August 2018

Thank you for the encouragement

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