Sunday, April 17, 2011

Funeral Comments

Rating: 4.8

I want to have my funeral
But first I need to die
But not an ordinary death
You see
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Jennifer Alejandra
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Khairul Ahsan 02 May 2014

Although I usually do not like poems on death, specially those written by young boys and girls, yet the title of your poem attracted me. The last stanza is indeed very touchy. Hope you have overcome your melancholy by now, as you have grown older by three years, and started enjoying the beauty of life.

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Lyn Paul 12 November 2013

The sadness of death is how it hurts those left grieving, something we really do not want to do, is leave pain to others. Dying is purely natural and even with heartache we must steer from death for whilst we are living we have something to give to others. Thank you Jennifer and i wish you well

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this is a beautifully written poem and connects to me in a way i can't express

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