Monday, February 25, 2013

Fundamentals Comments

Rating: 5.0

I belong, you belong, we all belong
Why can't you see that we're more than
Just a needle in a hay stack?
Beyond sight of a visual screen
...
Read full text

Kelvin Owusu
COMMENTS
Tunji Ibrahim 26 March 2013

A burst on the imagery of life and its fundamentals wherefrom we are incapable to escape.

0 0 Reply
Valerie Dohren 15 March 2013

All part of the mainframe - good one Kelvin.

0 0 Reply
Musfiq Us Shaleheen 15 March 2013

nicely written........ outstanding writing...... message is quite nice

0 0 Reply
Ellias Anderson Jr. 25 February 2013

Brilliant words dear pal. fundamentals. they are existence for lots of reasons. Wow, the rhymes in some of the parts are just great enjoy this art well done

1 0 Reply
Nader Baheri 25 February 2013

very perfectly written.i think your style of writing is changed.i enjoyed the ending very nice.all the truth and lies and so on which are us the same. so perfect~nb

0 0 Reply
Kelvin Owusu

Kelvin Owusu

Ghana
Close
Error Success