Sunday, September 7, 2008
Fun In Death Comments
Rating: ★4.5
BURIED ALIVE WITHIN A TOMB,
BURIED IN A COLD DARK ROOM.
ALIVE AND BREATHING DIRTY AIR,
AND YET STILL, I DON’ CARE.
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Rik Bertrand
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8/16/2025 4:05:49 AM # 1.0.0
Revolutionary, a desperate voice towards all directions. Your poem ignores death in a very funny way. This is poetry! The poem ends recalling Mefistophelis (Faust) but using a different method. Again this is a well crafted poetry. I give it a 9 (you will soon approach the levels of 10) . Thanks for sharing dear poet Rik Bertrand.