Fun Days As A Child Comments

Connie, I put me on the night shift sometimes, but, I never put me on the ' snob - shift '! C.J. had it right! Wrinkled millionaires that can remember being kids, are always better than the ones that never ate the pomegranates, or looked for toys with dents! B.V.A.

What wonderful cherished memories… thank you for helping me remember. Best, CJ

Thanks Isaias for your suggestion. It works better the way you said. Sincerely, Connie

Great concept but was not written out well. Need punctuation and line breaks where they need to be placed. Some of these lines could be broken up into stanzas other wise it reads as a list of long ago things that happened. If you want to play with form or not its up to you. Just as long as it back up the subject or message it will be okay.