He entered home
Fully drunk but not welcome
He fell down on floor
I had kept open the door
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Re: Fully drunk (Score: 1) by induce on Tuesday, July 16,2013 (13: 52: 28) Hi Jadia, a deep and heavy poem. It does have the strength to be published I do believe. Thank you for sharing mate. keep your writing up, always, induce... andye
Fine Kanniappan Kanniappan 11 minutes ago Fine! You told the evils of drinking and drunkenness.
sad Melissa Norton2 minutes ago very good insight, smooth reading, great story but I hope not yours.
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