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well i think you have done it all well

You have captured the essense of bewilderment & despair very well. With my sorrow disguise Still breathing with no holes (- love these two line!) I tear up this felling (feeling?) Which I struggle to let out Surviving this (these?) suicidal thoughts That surround(s) my being This obsession that I can’t control The depression that lives here in my shame This is a good poem, expresses your feelings and displays your poetic skill. Rgds, Ivan