Friday, July 21, 2017

Full Throttle Comments

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Heading Full Throttle to receive double for my trouble
Greatness will soon be born
Cause when the dark cloud set's sail
Outer darkness will give it's last hail
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Sonia Russell
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Jazib Kamalvi 24 July 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Sonia. Thank you very much,

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Seamus O Brian 21 July 2017

An intriguing piece, Sonia. It certainly flows with energy and a dynamic cadence. It hints at grand happenings without specific details, leaving the reader with a sense of urgency, and yet also a sense of awe. Nicely done, good poet.

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