Friday, November 13, 2020

Full Red Comments

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Her lips were full red
As though that she had bled,
Seducing him was her look
His soul, she then took.
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Randy McClave
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Denis Mair 13 November 2020

You have a vivid way of using colors in your poems. Redness is nature's way of signalling passion and danger. The woman you describe is on fire with passion, and her desire has a tinge of aggressiveness. She wields it like a weapon to bring the man under her power.5

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