Full Moon Against A Blue Sky Comments

i really like this one its very unique in its own way i like the concept and its a beatifully written poem a 10 + 10 =20!

Thia is bautiful, a calm poem, like a lullaby to the ears. but please take out the exclamation mark at the end, it takes out it's peace and rythm, of course only if you want to. But it is a great poem. Well written. best wishes, Ana