Friday, October 12, 2012

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As I pensively
the pictures scroll
Through the window
a chiseled doll
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Yasmin Khan 25 April 2013

it's a lovely moon poem about her raving charm. The full moon makes us lunatic and an eloquent poet like you can't help writing a poem like this one singing her beauty and charm. The last lines can be painted into a beautiful picture.

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The Reader 28 October 2012

what more i can say for this poem, it is one of your best creations.

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Saeed Jan 27 October 2012

superb.... I love the flow of thought in this piece... Pregnant words with highly imaginative background... The purpose of poetry here fulfills as it truly transports.... a lonely blade on a barren dune mute silent stands in a rakish moon.. I can feel the cold sensation o the dim light o moon.... A dejected soul standing alone with full moon overhead, vexed by some forlorn thoughts.. Sparkling piece of poetry

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