Tuesday, October 11, 2011

Full Impact Of Horror In War (Acrostic) Comments

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Functioning is difficult when in shock
Untimely end has come for all
Lack of food
Lack of hope
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Danny Draper 03 June 2012

Abhorant the seeds of war that germinate only poison. A good political poem for sure and nice acrostic.

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A Lifetime Of Fame 21 October 2011

I agree with Isunge. You do sound older than 14. This is a really deep poem, I really like it! Have you known someone who has been off to war?

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isunge Mwangase 13 October 2011

You sound older than 14, Wow!

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Crimson Love 11 October 2011

Incredibly written, I am one for politics ;) this poem, speaks....... very passionate write. :)

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Stefanie Fontker 11 October 2011

Ah, now this one is a true gem. A lovely political poem, you have a mind for justice. War in any form is an ugly thing.

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