Functioning is difficult when in shock
Untimely end has come for all
Lack of food
Lack of hope
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I agree with Isunge. You do sound older than 14. This is a really deep poem, I really like it! Have you known someone who has been off to war?
Incredibly written, I am one for politics ;) this poem, speaks....... very passionate write. :)
Ah, now this one is a true gem. A lovely political poem, you have a mind for justice. War in any form is an ugly thing.
Abhorant the seeds of war that germinate only poison. A good political poem for sure and nice acrostic.