Saturday, October 3, 2009

.... Full Collection Of Seven Deadly Sins Part 2 Comments

Rating: 3.1

Murder.....

From man's stupidity
To devils trickery
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Sivashanmugam Shanmugam 13 October 2009

Good work. It's helping me to know wats the seven sins.in Hindu n Buddism mentioned five. thare are 1. Killing one's father 2.Or mother 3.Or an arhat 4.Shedding the blood of Buddha and 5.Destroying the harmony of the sangha 5.

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Raj Nandy 08 October 2009

I LIKED READING BOTH PART ONE & TWO OF THIS POEM! IT SHOWS A GOOD CREATIVE EFFORT WITH A MESSAGE FOR THE READERS! -Raj Nandy

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ur two best poems 10sssssssssssss

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Ravi Sathasivam 06 October 2009

Another great poem from you. Words flow beautifully. Well penned Enjoyed reading it

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Amber Roser 06 October 2009

I found this collection (both 1 & 2) a great read, an interesting perspective on what can be a tired subject. Clearly alot of thought has gone into this piece, you are a fine wordsmith :)

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The Lost.. 06 October 2009

this is too hard but i like it :) thanx for the invitation.

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