.... Full Collection Of Seven Deadly Sins Part 1 Comments

Your poem is filled with moral standards that many head not. for centuries man's attitude have shifted back and forth to suit a man's wants and needs.Your poem gives one something to think about. Good write, Eyan.

Very profound thoughts...must become moral standard to reflect upon.

one of the best poems i read...10sssssssssssss

A very deep message! Nice write at this young age!

EXPLOSIVE, AND, DYNAMIC..WHAT GREAT WRITE, YOU CAPTURED THOSE SINS, AND TURNED THEM INTO ANOTHER MORE SINFUL SIN, AND THAT IS A GREAT MASTERPIECE OF WORK

Good meaningful poem Well penned. enjoyed reading it

a good write. Moral Value-

I enjoyed both parts, but must agree with another who made comment. broken down into single segments would have given better aspect. but i did enjoy...thanks

I appreciate this imagery of the poem, it's very unique.

Not bad! It is better than expectation! Keep it!

I think it's a bit harsh, but then so the things you are talking about are like that anyways....It was very interesting and good...i liked the imagery that i got and enjoyed the chance to see part of the 7 deadly sins in a new way! Thanks for inviting me here! :)

this is, agood moral, poem......

Unique idea this but I think I would much rather have it in small doses- a poem at a time.

Your art work is an experiment that worked wow good compilation of emotions and poems. Piercing good work my friend.

your composition is a peculiar dear..and this is a sign of creativeness..this is not a brief summary but the copy of all deadly sins..mygosh..i think, this is my first time to see a posted poem consisting of many poems inside..this is a good idea...and every step u make..hope, there's always an angel guiding your way...BISMILLAH