Thursday, April 19, 2007

Full Circle Comments

Rating: 5.0

I turn my back
for just a moment.
I can see you
and the tears in your eyes.
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Brian Hinckley
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Agnes Török 06 May 2007

It's all about the last scentance or word and you got this one just right. Wonderful.

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Michael Fischer 25 April 2007

Nice poem. I liked the title and the ending. Never let go to those who are most important to you. Top marks! -Michael

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Brian Hinckley

Brian Hinckley

Buffalo, New York
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