Saturday, March 7, 2009

Fulgent Light Comments

Rating: 5.0

The sun glares down on us
Fulgent patterns of sunlight

She tries to awake us warmly
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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE
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Reihaneh Jalalian 15 March 2009

short but enough to say what you mean. beautiful as always.

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You certainly created resplendent light in this beautiful little piece. I love the ending. Karin Anderson

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Anthony Foster 07 March 2009

Short and sweet. Just like the night shift at the finish

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