Saturday, September 27, 2014

Fulfillment Comments

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Like the tree needs its shadow from the morning sun,
I wait for your words till the day is done,
I crave nothing except your loving soul,
Without Love we are Nothing,
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Sandra Feldman
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Robert Murray Smith 08 July 2018

A beautiful poem Sandra.++10 Robert

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Daniel Brick 29 September 2014

Those first three lines are a capsule of the benefits of a loving relationship. As I read and re-read, in the back of mind I saw a couple coming home after being separated by a day at their jobs and beginning the evening-long conversation which binds them together day after day. That's the fulfillment that comes from a loving rapport. Your poem makes it very immediate and very desirable.

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