Ideas flowing spontaneously through tempos and rhythms
in music, touching and tantalizing every moment of life,
introducing various subjects rapidly into my mind.
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In this poem you link things which are often, and sometimes intentionally kept apart: poetry and prose, feeling and intellect. But in your poem these things prove to be very compatible and increase the sense of joy which runs the through poem like a recurring melody. And the passions which are being fulfilled play a role similar to the RAINING TONES in the previous poem in connecting separate things, inner and outer, self and others, things and people. Your words function like a thread which ties things into one fabric of reality.
With rhythm of life ideas flow spontaneously. New and enticing lines to arrange into prose. Fulfilling PASSION AND ESSENCE life blooms. Amazing this poem is.10
Hi RoseAnn, The most beautiful aspect of your poems are that they flow with rhythm. I love rhythm and having been a dancer most part of my life, i enjoy rhythm. Your poem flows passionately with music too. Delighted to be on your page to read your beautiful poem - Fulfilling Passion. God bless you, dear!