Thursday, May 19, 2005

Fulfil Your Need, But Not Your Greed Comments

Rating: 4.8

The history of Earth dates back to millions of years ago,
When a perfect engineer, ‘the God’, created this world.
He made life in forms of plants and animals,
And for all gave them Earth - the abode.
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Nalini Hebbar 16 July 2006

beautiful poem and great message...love...nalini

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PREETS...YOU CONTINUE TO IMPRESS, YOUNG LADY..VERY WELL CRAFTED WORK...RHYTHM IN SYVC....SMOOTH FLUXION SUPER WRITE...10!

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Esther Leclerc 21 May 2006

This poem has an important message and it is told very well, Preeti. : ]

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Aryaman Naik 03 October 2005

You are a sensitive and wonderful writer of verse. I read all your 20 poems one after another. Poetry is distilled prose and one of the best forms of expression of one's thoughts that come from the soul and heart. Your poems reflect that fully. I look forward to reading many more of your poems. You might also like to read Vidisha Khera.

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Peter A. Crowther 25 September 2005

Laudable sentiment but is it true? Has all mankind come yet to this realization?

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