Everyday it’s a post-haste hour
I leave behind all that’s dour
With a light heart and endless pleasure
I rush yonder I lend my treasure
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Very good poem, expressing the hope that your little brother gives you. Your love for him serves a fulcrum that excites balance in your life! High marks.
in some fertile moments life suffers expansion.... very lyrical and well-knit.... keep this pen pumpin' aroha-rehan