Friday, June 19, 2009

Fugitive Silence Comments

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FUGITIVE SILENCE
esspeecee …12.04.03.

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Dr. Sakti P. Chakravorty
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nice theme Dr.! ! ! this call stems from the bottom of your heart it s evident! ! ! Stay, Make Platonic affair ---> platonic verses! ! ! great done!

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Sarwar Chowdhury 09 August 2009

Fine wording! chosen words are nice! 10+

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Duh Huh 01 August 2009

Beautiful Dr Sakti. It all came together so well, all the way to the final and my favorite stanza. Ye, Silence Stay as nectarine pitcher, For ambrosial indulgence In my solitary abyssal abode. just soothingly, silently, beautiful. Thank you for sharing my friend. :)

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Mary Garcia 18 July 2009

Silence came to me. We need sometimes to rest with silence to think to improve. Nice poem

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