Sunday, May 6, 2007

Frustrations Comments

Rating: 5.0

Being broke is dire frustration
reliance on self diminishes so low
only the spirit left alive yet weakening
kiss of death becomes the ultimate wish
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Marvin Brato Sr
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Poornima Kanasen 07 May 2007

Hey ya, Frustration...nice theme that you have placed here..I liked this particular line of yours..' mangled by failures that paralyze the inner soul '...A hit after another leaves no space for your inner soul to hang on....Nothing seems the same when you are in frustration, everything just happens against you...The pain, unbearable..The joy, impossible it semblances..Nice write...A good ten for you....Well done.. With lots of best wishes and love, K.Poornima...

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Marvin Brato Sr

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