Tuesday, August 19, 2014

Frustration Comments

Rating: 5.0

Dear God,
I am looking for you,
I went to Kaba,
I went to Kashi,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Seema Chowdhury 22 November 2015

God is inside our hearts, minds and souls....... He has his own timings and a perfect plan for us.

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Melvina Germain 18 October 2015

This is a thought provoking and heartfelt poem longing for help with the chronic suffering of a people. I feel the pain and asking our Father to come forth and irradicate such suffering touches my heart and soul. Well penned.....

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Geetha Jayakumar 20 August 2014

Thoughtful poem from your pen. Pains and sufferings can be seen in each lines And not only me, My nation and my world, I s a place of sufferings, With pains and strains, With bloods and wounds. Still the question remains unanswered..... Where are you? Don't have you sometime? For a weak old man. We are tested in all walks of our life. Some may be too tough to cross, everything happens so suddenly and everything comes at the same time. Which is really painful. Loved the way you presented it. Thanks for sharing with us.

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Valsa George 19 August 2014

I can sense your frustration in every line! I think God won't interfere.....! He has given man the wisdom to scale over his difficulties or may be He is testing our power of endurance! Your poems have a blend of humour and high philosophy! Enjoyed the poem and at the same time feel sorry for this 'old man'!

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