Friday, July 4, 2008

Frustration~ Comments

Rating: 3.5

The frustration scratches
at the back of my head,
My anger craves
to see everyone dead,
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Jhanus Thanatos
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Greenwolfe 1962 05 July 2008

I'd like to recommend this but the writing is so emotional, that it has no consistency that makes it easy and friendly for the reader. I'm sure the writer is fine with most, if not all, that it says. But the readers will have a hard time receiving the kind of message the writer wishes to send. GW62

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Javier Falcon 04 July 2008

I have had the feeling, I can relate, beautiful write...

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Jhanus Thanatos

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