Wednesday, April 23, 2008

Frustration Comments

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beats falling as though they are tears from above
snapping is in happen like fingers that rub
tone sounds hoping to hear tappings of love
sights wander in flickering wonder
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Dr.subhendu Kar 29 April 2008

yet the beats the golden beads that whispers across the tunes the song mellifluous of cockoo`s song when attuned to the melody when flows................simply lucid by the dream of love wishful, well penned,10+, thanks for sharing

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~ Jon London ~ 23 April 2008

Great write, i love the vibe! ! ! nice creation all the best J.L

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Jessica Jemima 23 April 2008

Very artistic... Fantastic! It's nice to read something once in a while that we can interpret in our own way. Something descriptive and imaginative. Job well done =)

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