Tuesday, September 6, 2011

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My stomach stirs my sleep as life pulls me outside
To watch the moon in the sky
The mist starts to rise, stars start to fade
Yet the sun is still but a glow
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Amy Lalala 07 September 2011

After your kind words I had to check your poetry out! I think this one is my favorite! I felt the same emotions i imagine you must've been feeling when you wrote this and couldn't help but smile!

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