Fruitless Expectations Comments

Beautifully imagery... worth reading..... deserves 10/10.

symilies chosen and their style of presentaion make the poem sounding. shan

Wow Seema... This is what I liked the most... It made me think for a while and grasp the full of it... Thasnk God, I didn't let it escape like the fish in your poem... :) Desires and expectations and what an imagery you have created here... Simply amazing... Thanks for making me read this one... Regards, Kamran

Good imagery. well done

Ufffff.......superbbbb write seema ji, a marvellous write with very deep thoughts no matter how many time i read it, it still seems as i'm reading it for the very first time, as im reading my own thoughts and feeliongs in this master piece, thanks you for sharing it and it definitely goes to my most favs, many many 10ssss for it rgds asif

Failure is not an option but it did happened.Great piece.

well narrated simile...nice...10