Fruitfulpiece Of Love Comments

Love is everytging in life! ! So, let us love all mankind and, live in peace. Nice work.

I love it, man. Keep doin' ya thing.

Nicely said! I love the way the poem speaks of heaven. To help improve your work you should use more detail to paint a better picture in the readers mind. More detail in the writing, the more unique your poems will become giving the readers a greater experience. Keep up the good work!

sweeeet in one word your fruit In His Love