Thursday, October 16, 2014

Fruitful Drops Comments

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Hailstorms down
Drowning dust
Sprouting the shoots
Goes a phrase
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Sentamu Aziz
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Tajudeen Shah 16 October 2014

well, wonderful, reminder attempt in poesy. convention, traditions, prosperous and innocent past is well induced by your sweet verses. though it looks very humble and cute, gentle and sweet, the pith is what the reader enjoys dining upon the nectar of his/her mellow past. yummie.. mangoes, ripe and sweet, that too shared with birds and kids alike.. all that and the heavy drops drumming over the thick green leaves, the slant shower dancing by the long isolated village streets, the chorus of the nocturnal creatures, arguments of frogs all... in place reminded. thanks. now, look at my latest two poems, and i would appreciate your sharp review on them. pls.

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