Sunday, February 15, 2009

Frozen Wishes Comments

Rating: 4.9

The night was windy and wet,
And the three thieves were as cold as can get.
They ran, desperate to escape the rain,
But they knew it was all in vain,
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Layla Stone
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Khairul Ahsan 08 April 2015

Loved your story telling poem, loved the story as well. The title is eye catching. The text is long but never felt boring. 'Outside it was a bright, beautiful day, The two nodded, before going their separate ways.' - Two beautiful lines to end the poem. Well done!

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Shekhar Joshi 14 May 2009

yeah i enjoyed the story. u have a very good story telling ability.. excellent work

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Alicia Cobian 16 March 2009

i really loved this. great job!

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Christine Kerr 13 March 2009

What a great job on a somewhat kind of fairytale. I really enjoyed the story behind what is known as a common human nature.10+++

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Julia Wakeman 19 February 2009

well written story. you have captured many people by those first two men, I just wish that more of us could follow in the footsteps of the last.

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