The night was windy and wet,
And the three thieves were as cold as can get.
They ran, desperate to escape the rain,
But they knew it was all in vain,
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yeah i enjoyed the story. u have a very good story telling ability.. excellent work
What a great job on a somewhat kind of fairytale. I really enjoyed the story behind what is known as a common human nature.10+++
well written story. you have captured many people by those first two men, I just wish that more of us could follow in the footsteps of the last.
Loved your story telling poem, loved the story as well. The title is eye catching. The text is long but never felt boring. 'Outside it was a bright, beautiful day, The two nodded, before going their separate ways.' - Two beautiful lines to end the poem. Well done!