Heavily overcast sky
With dark clouds
Gentle piercing wind
Rattles oaks, deodhars and pines
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The cycle of phases makes nature a supreme force. Your poem reminds me of a fact, ' Only a few poets can portray things quite vividly and you are among them'.
Really good poem on nature. You are a talented poet. Thanks for sharing
natural and cyclic......felt good reading it