Monday, August 24, 2009

Frozen Time Comments

Rating: 5.0

Father time
To this being I beg
That he will freeze time
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Romeo Della Valle 16 December 2011

Beauty and Sweetness radiate through this well penned and poignant write. This heart touching poem clearly shows your great poetic talent! Thank you for sharing! 10+++ Keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ....

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Shekhar Joshi 04 September 2009

sweet poem....sweet longing.....u wrote well..... good work.....

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Ted M 28 August 2009

A wish to freeze time and for a nice cause. Nice write.........

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Steven S 26 August 2009

You know your hearts desires well... and you know what you want when it comes to sharing life in that special way... and you have talent when it come to expressing all this. Wonderful poem.

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