Saturday, June 19, 2010

Frozen Tears Comments

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The days are forgotten
The nights are longer
When thoughts are the enemy
and memories are no longer welcome
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Iris Rain
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Loved the poetic emotion of this poem. Frozen tears, a heart so fragile yearning, not to be hurt beyond this point. Really enjoyed the read; D

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Apurva Jain 26 June 2010

'it is love found and lost, it is you' one of the best lines I've ever read... I've got nothing to say about this poem... :)

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Jean Dament 19 June 2010

A heartfelt love poem tha captures the pain of losing someone so well here. It had a nice naturel flow to it too. Thanks for sharing. In the last verse the 2nd line you have 'feeze'-it should be 'freeze' ok Spiritsong

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