Sunday, March 15, 2009

Frozen Tears Comments

Rating: 5.0

On a park bench under a spreading pine
With face in his hands an old man cried
Salty tears followed deep etched lines
Unashamed without pride
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T.James Becker
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Tia Maria 20 April 2009

Oh James that was a heart wrenching piece of poetry so brilliantly written - well done TJ. Luv Tia

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Dream Catcher 26 March 2009

TJ, so glad I popped in and saw this magnificent poem....you just get better and better my friend...2 comments? ? Are they all mad? ? ? ? ...Loads of love to you, *dc*xxxx

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Raven Mendez 15 March 2009

That was heart breaking and so true at the same time. I really liked it, and at the same time I thought it was sad. Good Job!

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T.James Becker

T.James Becker

Prescott Arizona
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