Sunday, July 27, 2008

....Frozen Tears Comments

Rating: 4.0

Swelling waves hit the gravelly shore
Calmly retreat into watery oblivion
To live again, to die once more
Mind harbors such thoughts in million
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Seema Aarella
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Sivan P.G Menon 27 July 2008

seema.. ...subtle notes of pain...agonies... death'....an enigma... unsatiated longingness...to live... seema I find the touch of mysticism.... absurdity.... your diction..has the poetic effervescense... charming tones... sivan..

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Kesav Easwaran 27 July 2008

'To live again, to die once more...' this line tells a lot, seema...a good write though sad and touching 10 votes

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