Tuesday, February 16, 2016

Frozen Rain Comments

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The sleet comes tinkling down in a whispered melody
A white rain in a still, sleeping world
That turns to crystal the bare, brown branches
Of the silent slumbering trees.
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Chinedu Dike 14 March 2016

A lovely portrayal of falling hailstones, nicely encapsulated and well written with conviction. You're got a knack for writing and nature. Thanks for sharing Sylvia.

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Soul Watcher 16 February 2016

I liked the title of the poem, it's deep actually

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