Wednesday, August 12, 2009

Frozen In Time Comments

Rating: 5.0

Darkness descended
This cold unbearable
I shiver I reach out, my vision blinded by tears
I try to rise, yet fall on my knees
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Tharindu Atukorala
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Jen Capaldi 10 October 2009

a truely heartfelt poem clearly expressed by your past experiences. all of those wounds will cut you through to the core of your soul, let your pen bleed out you wounds onto paper and time heal them as it always does. excellently expressed and wonderful choice in wording. keep writing my friend. your poetry will be you medicine and your vindication. great job! Jen

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Tharindu Atukorala

Tharindu Atukorala

Colombo, Sri Lanka
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