Frozen in time
but eyes still see
sequence of events
still pass me by
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A thoughtful write of our position in space and time? ...well penned Dave
Eyes are wonderful creations in human face. Eyes magically capture vision and spread vision. An amazing poem is beautifully penned.10
Life can look linear but that's because we often think in straight lines I Likes this it has the essence of truth Great write
Your few words have captured an eventful life. Wonderful to read.
A thoughtful, evocative and eloquent poem! 10+