Wednesday, October 24, 2018

Frozen In Time Comments

Rating: 5.0

Frozen in time
but eyes still see
sequence of events
still pass me by
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Dave Alan Walker
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Bryony Sheldon 01 August 2019

A thoughtful, evocative and eloquent poem! 10+

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M Asim Nehal 29 October 2018

Time to do introspection, a thoughtful poem.10

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 October 2018

Eyes still see! ! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Tom Allport 25 October 2018

A thoughtful write of our position in space and time? ...well penned Dave

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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 October 2018

Eyes are wonderful creations in human face. Eyes magically capture vision and spread vision. An amazing poem is beautifully penned.10

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Paul Brookes 25 October 2018

Life can look linear but that's because we often think in straight lines I Likes this it has the essence of truth Great write

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Lyn Paul 24 October 2018

Your few words have captured an eventful life. Wonderful to read.

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Dave Alan Walker

Dave Alan Walker

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